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Literature Text

after all the chaos  
shaken by the breadth of tides
we sit on a pile of rocks
as the  
  
copper tinted sun
hangs low on the horizon
in the aftermath
something to do with Japan and faraway shores
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The-Dormant-Sprite's avatar
i like this. the "all" is unnecessary, and creates a conversational tone which doesn't match the rest of the piece. otherwise, good job.